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Posted on 12-30-19, 06:06 pm


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A custom level I made for my romhack I'm planning on releasing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnVzUMTmEeI
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My old hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5153-more-super-mario-bros-ds/
My new hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5551-more-super-mario-bros-3ds/
My website: https://uptownranger.weebly.com/
Posted on 12-30-19, 06:13 pm
Fire Brother
Eugene

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Looks good!
Posted on 12-30-19, 06:18 pm


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Posted by KingYoshi
Looks good!
Thanks
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My old hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5153-more-super-mario-bros-ds/
My new hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5551-more-super-mario-bros-3ds/
My website: https://uptownranger.weebly.com/
Posted on 12-30-19, 07:00 pm
Giant Paratroopa
Cream Cheese King

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I like the level alot. Your level design is really good. I only have a couple things that could make it better.

The background could be changed to something a little more dark. I wouldn't have an issue with this, but Peach's castle in the back looks a little weird. The Fire FG effect looks strange too without any fire or lava present.

The 3rd starcoin bonus room is too hard to find. You should make it to where there's a little clue or hint to find it, but from what I can tell, there's no way a player would be able to find it. The bonus room is a little too hard too with the 3 skewers toward the star coin.

Other than that, it's a pretty nice castle!
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Posted on 12-30-19, 09:41 pm


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Posted by Skylander
I like the level alot. Your level design is really good. I only have a couple things that could make it better.

The background could be changed to something a little more dark. I wouldn't have an issue with this, but Peach's castle in the back looks a little weird. The Fire FG effect looks strange too without any fire or lava present.

The 3rd starcoin bonus room is too hard to find. You should make it to where there's a little clue or hint to find it, but from what I can tell, there's no way a player would be able to find it. The bonus room is a little too hard too with the 3 skewers toward the star coin.

Other than that, it's a pretty nice castle!


Thanks

The fire effects are supposed to ressemble dust particles since you are in a "broken down" castle. And I chose Peach's castle because the castle I'm playing in is on the other side of the map and you can see it through all of the holes (my apologies if you didn't understand that, it sounded better in my head)

For the 3rd starcoin room location I could place some coins to hint the pipe. While the 3rd starcoin itself is meant to be a challenge for the player
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My old hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5153-more-super-mario-bros-ds/
My new hack: https://nsmbhd.net/thread/5551-more-super-mario-bros-3ds/
My website: https://uptownranger.weebly.com/
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