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Posted on 05-16-21, 08:41 am (rev. 6 by KindAiden on 05-19-21, 08:26 am)
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hi, thank's for checking this thread. i hope you like it.

layout:
1. description
2. trailer
3. screenshots
4. download

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this is just a simple level hack. right now it only replaces world 1, but i'm working on more levels.
feedback is highly appreciated.

trailer:



screenshots:
















Download [updated]: download here
Posted on 05-16-21, 12:30 pm
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Please reduce the size of the screenshots they are very large, on the other hand I say,yeah another hack
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Posted on 05-16-21, 04:13 pm
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Posted by alpha
Please reduce the size of the screenshots they are very large, on the other hand I say,yeah another hack


Exactly. But, anyway, that looks like a good and simple hack
Posted on 05-16-21, 04:41 pm
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Posted by alpha
Please reduce the size of the screenshots they are very large, on the other hand I say,yeah another hack


sorry about that, i didn't know how to set the image size.
i fixed it now, thanks for the feedback.
Posted on 05-17-21, 12:16 am
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now it's much better, you're good at designing levels, and that's good
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Posted on 05-17-21, 03:36 pm
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Posted by alpha
now it's much better, you're good at designing levels, and that's good


Yes the level design is really great
Posted on 05-17-21, 03:50 pm
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Yes the level design is really great


No, it's not. KindAiden rule no. 1 when making a hack you want to publish is to entirely delete the original level and start from scratch. I can see in every level in the trailer that you clearly didn't do that e.g. 1-2 having the same spawn. It's not a problem per se to have the same level themes as the original ones but when you can spot whole parts/elements, it leaves a negative connotation.

Besides of that the levels look kinda bland and idealess but that's understandable assuming this is your first release ever. I'm just saying you could improve on these things by adding decoration and/or trying different designs in the level structure.
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Posted on 05-17-21, 04:05 pm
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Bruh I said that by seeing the screenshots, I haven't played the levels yet .

I guess I'll give them a shot.

But you're right! If you can spot the original parts of the level, then it's not good.
Posted on 05-17-21, 04:59 pm
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Posted by BL4ZED
Yes the level design is really great


No, it's not. KindAiden rule no. 1 when making a hack you want to publish is to entirely delete the original level and start from scratch. I can see in every level in the trailer that you clearly didn't do that e.g. 1-2 having the same spawn. It's not a problem per se to have the same level themes as the original ones but when you can spot whole parts/elements, it leaves a negative connotation.

Besides of that the levels look kinda bland and idealess but that's understandable assuming this is your first release ever. I'm just saying you could improve on these things by adding decoration and/or trying different designs in the level structure.


The same thing happened with the beta 3 of my hack and worse, I could not see the trailer but I recommend that you follow the advice of arceus, well as you are new I suppose you do not know how to use all the mechanisms of theeditor, right, but do not give up, follow go ahead with the beta 2 you will show more impression, do not get depressed and go ahead that I learned when I released the beta 3 of my hack, kindAiden, cheer up

Posted by BL4ZED
Bruh I said that by seeing the screenshots, I haven't played the levels yet .

I guess I'll give them a shot.

But you're right! If you can spot the original parts of the level, then it's not good.


yeah, doing a zero level may seem difficult but just expand your imagination and voila
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Posted on 05-17-21, 07:04 pm
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Thanks for the advice (both of you )
Posted on 05-18-21, 09:51 am
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i just uploaded the updated patch.
this one has small edits in existing levels, like decoration and layout.

thanks for all the feedback, i hope i put all of it to good use.
Posted on 05-18-21, 01:03 pm
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Posted by KindAiden
i just uploaded the updated patch.
this one has small edits in existing levels, like decoration and layout.

thanks for all the feedback, i hope i put all of it to good use.


Yes, I hope you do
Posted on 05-18-21, 02:52 pm
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i am fucked, my phone does not let me download anything through google drive or gmail, I do not know why
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Posted on 05-18-21, 02:53 pm, deleted by  Arceus: that does not help
Posted on 05-18-21, 03:01 pm
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ok, although if kindaiden uploaded the patch to the nsmbhd loader it would download it
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Posted on 05-18-21, 03:46 pm
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Posted by alpha
ok, although if kindaiden uploaded the patch to the nsmbhd loader it would download it


i did it! i hope you enjoy.
Posted on 05-18-21, 06:16 pm (rev. 2 by  Vadenimo on 05-18-21, 06:20 pm)
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Posted by Arceus

No, it's not. KindAiden rule no. 1 when making a hack you want to publish is to entirely delete the original level and start from scratch. I can see in every level in the trailer that you clearly didn't do that e.g. 1-2 having the same spawn. It's not a problem per se to have the same level themes as the original ones but when you can spot whole parts/elements, it leaves a negative connotation.

Besides of that the levels look kinda bland and idealess but that's understandable assuming this is your first release ever. I'm just saying you could improve on these things by adding decoration and/or trying different designs in the level structure.


Well, I have to agree to some points of  Arceus's criticism, because most of the trailer looks blank and W1-2's beginning looks like the start of NSMB's W1-2 level. I can't say my opinion to the level design itself on the NSMB editor or in the game itself, because I haven't played it yet. I probably can't play it until have my exams done and until I have an American NSMB copy.
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