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| Luoon |
Posted on 11-17-19, 04:29 pm
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Hey guys! Luoon again, and i make the first level of my hack and i wanna know what do you guys think. Its good or i have to make better?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQ55ATENunw Thanks for reading! See you later 
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Posted on 11-17-19, 04:46 pm
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☭ coffee and cream
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I'd say it looks decent, minus some minor nitpicks, like the miscentered coin arc at about 0:36, or how the pit at 0:32 is odd to me (it's fine, just... odd)
but atleast I can't see any huge level design flaw there, it looks and plays smooth from what I see maybe, the Mega Mario part at 1:03 is a bit goofy, you aren't actually smashing things other than a few enemies couldn't really see past 1:06 because Youtube decided to stop loading or playing the video past that point for no reason, but the gimmick of falling back down and finishing the level as Mega Mario is neat, didn't think it was possible even _________________________ Kuribo64 - zrghij |
| Luoon |
Posted on 11-17-19, 04:55 pm
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Posted by Arisotura I'd say it looks decent, minus some minor nitpicks, like the miscentered coin arc at about 0:36, or how the pit at 0:32 is odd to me (it's fine, just... odd) but atleast I can't see any huge level design flaw there, it looks and plays smooth from what I see maybe, the Mega Mario part at 1:03 is a bit goofy, you aren't actually smashing things other than a few enemies couldn't really see past 1:06 because Youtube decided to stop loading or playing the video past that point for no reason, but the gimmick of falling back down and finishing the level as Mega Mario is neat, didn't think it was possible even Thanks Man! I will improve. About the Mega Mario part, do you know that block ladder that has at the end of the stages before the goal pole right? The third star coin is stuck in the middle of these blocks and Mario can only catch with the Mega Mushoroom. Again, Thanks for your opinion! 
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Posted on 11-17-19, 04:59 pm
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☭ coffee and cream
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| Luoon |
Posted on 11-17-19, 05:48 pm
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Karma: 12 Posts: 7/7 Since: 12-29-17 |
Posted by Arisotura you're welcome. I ain't no man, tho. Oh Sorry XD |
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Posted on 11-17-19, 10:36 pm (rev. 1 by
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Posted on 11-17-19, 10:59 pm
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☭ coffee and cream
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Posted on 11-17-19, 11:17 pm (rev. 1 by
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Hammer Brother Karma: 3526 Posts: 1034/1075 Since: 11-29-11 |
Mhhmmmmmmmmmm..
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Posted on 11-17-19, 11:33 pm
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☭ coffee and cream
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Posted on 11-18-19, 03:17 pm
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Posted by Arisotura I don't see what you're referring to  He might be referring to "Sex: Male" part on that screenshot he posted _________________________ 
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