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Posted on 11-17-19, 04:29 pm


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Hey guys! Luoon again, and i make the first level of my hack and i wanna know what do you guys think. Its good or i have to make better?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQ55ATENunw

Thanks for reading! See you later
Posted on 11-17-19, 04:46 pm
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I'd say it looks decent, minus some minor nitpicks, like the miscentered coin arc at about 0:36, or how the pit at 0:32 is odd to me (it's fine, just... odd)

but atleast I can't see any huge level design flaw there, it looks and plays smooth from what I see

maybe, the Mega Mario part at 1:03 is a bit goofy, you aren't actually smashing things other than a few enemies

couldn't really see past 1:06 because Youtube decided to stop loading or playing the video past that point for no reason, but the gimmick of falling back down and finishing the level as Mega Mario is neat, didn't think it was possible even
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Posted on 11-17-19, 04:55 pm


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Posted by Arisotura
I'd say it looks decent, minus some minor nitpicks, like the miscentered coin arc at about 0:36, or how the pit at 0:32 is odd to me (it's fine, just... odd)

but atleast I can't see any huge level design flaw there, it looks and plays smooth from what I see

maybe, the Mega Mario part at 1:03 is a bit goofy, you aren't actually smashing things other than a few enemies

couldn't really see past 1:06 because Youtube decided to stop loading or playing the video past that point for no reason, but the gimmick of falling back down and finishing the level as Mega Mario is neat, didn't think it was possible even


Thanks Man! I will improve. About the Mega Mario part,
do you know that block ladder that has at the end of the stages before the goal pole right?
The third star coin is stuck in the middle of these blocks and Mario can only catch with the Mega Mushoroom.

Again, Thanks for your opinion!
Posted on 11-17-19, 04:59 pm
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you're welcome. I ain't no man, tho.
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Posted on 11-17-19, 05:48 pm


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Posted by Arisotura
you're welcome. I ain't no man, tho.

Oh Sorry XD
Posted on 11-17-19, 10:36 pm (rev. 1 by  KingYoshi on 11-17-19, 10:36 pm)
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Posted by Arisotura
you're welcome. I ain't no man, tho.




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Posted on 11-17-19, 10:59 pm
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I don't see what you're referring to


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Posted on 11-17-19, 11:17 pm (rev. 1 by  KingYoshi on 11-17-19, 11:17 pm)
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Mhhmmmmmmmmmm..

Posted on 11-17-19, 11:33 pm
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Mario might want to go to an ophtalmologist
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Posted on 11-18-19, 03:17 pm
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Posted by Arisotura
I don't see what you're referring to



He might be referring to "Sex: Male" part on that screenshot he posted
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