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Posted on 05-22-16, 05:38 pm in The single levels thread! (rev. 1 by ImageBot on 11-21-16, 03:20 am)

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Posted by Dragey

This my first post here, and I also made a level! This is my first level, and I just made it to learn how to do this. It's pretty simple, but I think it's ok to play hopefully.

Review

So this is my first review of a NSMB Level!

This may also be the first review that I used an Xbox Controller to play with, but I may be wrong. Anyway this level is pretty boring. I don't want to be too harsh, since this is your first level but I completed it in 0 minutes. I suggest you make it 3 minutes longer and this stage would be pretty decent. Also the thwomp is unavoidable unless you go to a Toad House and get Fire Flower/Mushroom. Unless that block at the beginning of the stage had a mushroom, I can't collect it. A baby's first Super Mario Maker level (even though some people make good ones) is way better than stage. I don't want to be too harsh again, because this is your first level so I'll be fair on rating it.

Final Verdict:
Graphics: Very Vanilla. I like Vanilla Levels (but not the flavor itself) but it seemed to Vanilsh to be good. IMO
Entertainment: Shocked to see how short the level was
Quality: Mediocre
NSMBDS Level Scale: 3/10 Very Bland.

I know this is your first level, but it seemed too short and not a lot of new elements to make it original. It may have fans, but for me it just seems too short and boring. I have nothing else to say.

I see you were struggling to pass my level so let me educate you! =D

When you spawn you see a question block behind you. ( containing a star ) Right? You following me so far?
Looks like you could trow a Koopa Troopa shell to activate it!

Then you follow the coins! Wow! Imagine that! Never would have thought of that one.

You find a red Koopa Troopa.
You jump on his head. You sure you can do that? Awesome.
Then you hold S to pick up the shell! :oooo
After that insanely complicated maneuver, you ride the elevator up!

When you get back to where you spawned.
You simply stop holding S. ( if you need a detailed tutorial on that PM me )

Grab the star. ( that can't escape so don't worry )
Use the star to go past the thwomp.
And there you go!
Sorry my level was too complicated for you to understand.

Dragey	Posted on 05-22-16, 01:25 pm in The single levels thread! (rev. 1 by ImageBot on 11-21-16, 03:20 am) Hi. Link ID: 48132 +2
Karma: 61 Posts: 1/2 Since: 05-22-16	This my first post here, and I also made a level! This is my first level, and I just made it to learn how to do this. It's pretty simple, but I think it's ok to play hopefully. Big thanks so my friend snake block for helping me out and teaching me everything. Download link: Here is a link!

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