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Posted on 08-08-12, 12:45 pm
Porcupo
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Since: 01-06-12
Here is my level:
http://nsmbhd.net/get.php?id=410

It doesn't have a Midway Point, in such a disaster, there isn't any time to save your progress

Video:

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Posted on 08-08-12, 10:38 pm
I am random… very random.

Karma: 750
Posts: 63/682
Since: 01-17-12
Yes I am finished!!!
I don't think this is the best level because I was in a rush...

Here is link


<Silvreus>It has been 1 month, 4 days, 2 hours, 21 minutes and 3 seconds since I last remember being lazy.

Posted on 08-11-12, 10:24 am
Porcupo
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Since: 01-06-12
Okay, since there are no more levels, I'd say: Let the critiques begin. Everyone has to complete their critique before wednesday 15 august 11:59 PM Europe/Londen Timezone.
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Posted on 08-15-12, 11:37 am
Roy Koopa


Karma: 3996
Posts: 2105/2722
Since: 06-26-11
Critique:

 Lunarius
Requirement: Yes, you have to keep running, otherwise you'll get lost in Lava.

10/10 Points

Design: it is short, but fun to play. At some points I thought its a bit empty but that was still ok. The only thing what bothered me, was that you needed to jump into lava to get to the red pipe :< Nobody knows something like that And the slopes were shit. You didnt place the 00 0A 20 00 Tile at the top, so you couldnt continue to walk and you needed to jump. That caused a dead, because instead of just running, I got stuck and then the stone touched me.

13/20 Points

Polish: Like I said before, the slopes... And there was the red coin ring, which... didnt spawn red coins, but normal coins I missed some poewrups. Only one at the beginning. Nothing more.

15/20 Points

Overall: 38/50 Points



 RiksKing

Requirement: Yes, you have to keep running, otherwise you'll get lost in Lava or die between screen and wall.

10/10 Points

Design: Actually, the first part didnt really feel like a disaster. It was just a empty looking tower with rising lava But everything was well designed. I could play it without something bothering me.

15/20 Points

Polish: Hmm yeah. Everything was ok

20/20 Points

Overall: 45/50 Points
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Posted on 08-15-12, 02:39 pm (rev. 2 by  RiksKing on 08-15-12, 02:41 pm)
Porcupo
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Since: 01-06-12
Critique:

Ray & Fr33ze

Requirements: Yeah, it's good, you have to keep running.

10/10

Design: I liked the level, really well designed, but it was incredibly hard. Very nice tileset,
and I liked the new vertical moving stone blocks, and the broken pipe. (Still, a bit weird to set them
in a Lava world.)

18/20

Polish: Hmm.. No problems on this one

20/20

Overall: 48/50




MKN3DS™

Requirements: Yeah, it's good, you have to keep running.

10/10

Level Design: Man, I hated the part with the 3 warp cannons. Two of the three where shooting me
to a hammer bro, and the other one caused me to the lava. Also, the slopes where kind of a problem

14/20

Polish: A bit weird, a red coin ring spawning normal coins. And yeah, the slopes where pretty mean.

16/20

Overall: 40/50
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Posted on 08-19-12, 10:11 am (rev. 1 by  RiksKing on 08-19-12, 10:12 am)
Porcupo
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Well, I think we should end this contest, because it doesn't seems that MKN3DS™ is going to critique anymore.

All right, here are the scores

Ray/Fr33ze: 48/50
RiksKing: 45/50
MKN3DS™: 39/50 - 20 points deduction so 19/50

If I'm going to do a contest next time, I still hope for more player

I hope you had fun with playing my contest

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